when my boyfriend left,i started to cry.
i was very sad i thugh he would die.
my dad told me not to worry and to pray.
i think about him everyday.
i remeber the fun we gad together
we would play and laugh forever.
together we would go to the park and walk.
then we would have lunch and start to talk.
now that hes gone i hope hes alright.
i cry so much every day and night.
and joe i just want to tell you.i still love you.
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that's sweet hun
i really like it
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oh wow what a great poem! lots of feeling! it funny how i felt just like that when my boyfriend and i broke up. you do such a great job! keep writing!
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no offence but i didnt enjoy this one as much as your other more simpler poems it was sort of cliche
but you previous works have been great you reming me of a female shel silverstein -
mmm very emotional. and good writing, but perhaps a spell check could help? i noticed a few typos
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Omg dat made me sad...I felt very similar wen me n b.f broke up. -
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im sorry
im sorry to make you sad.
im just writing my feelings down.
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