Once in a lifetime true love comes our way,
turns our world upside down, brightens up each day.
changes the darkest sky to a vibrant blue,
like moths to a flickering flame, we were attracted me and you.
In our hearts we know our lives will never be the same,
as the fire of passion burns and fiercely starts to rage.
Once in a lifetime true love makes our spirits soar,
takes us on a journey our souls have never been on before.
It fills our bodies with an immense aching desire,
consuming us like a rapid burning forest fire.
Once in a lifetime true love will let us know,
eventually I will have to let you, my true love go.
One day in the future what we have will come to pass,
we'll share a kiss so tender knowing it will be our last.
When that day happens my heart will break in two,
as I give you the part of me that will always belong to you.
Once in a lifetime true love will make it clear,
the pain that we'll go through was worth loving each other so dear.
For whether we are near or very far apart,
the LoveBeat will continue in each of our caring hearts.
Darling, it will be with us forever, see us through our day,
a clock ticking inside each of us until we meet again.
Until that day's upon us I will love you as I do,
with a deep burning passion that's genuine, honest and true.
I will treasure every moment of our beautiful gift
for once in a lifetime do you get to experience a love like this.
A contest entry
- lovelovelove! ^-^ by sora..
700 points, ended September 3, 2008, 18 entries
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450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prompt is LOVE by lovingpoet.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lovely poem thank you
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Thank you
~sugar~
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grabs another tissue
this is so sweet and so honest. How blessed is he who this is written for. I have a love like this in my life, but it took kissing alot of toads... I applaud you, take a bow...
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment
he is a wonderful man.
Truly appreciated
~sugar~
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lovely write
thanks for entering
good luck -
That is a beautifull poem and so true, You only have the one chance and you have to do your best.
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Thank you carl
That you do...make the most of every moment together as though it is your last.
I value and appreciate your comment
~sugar~
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Stunning!
The power of true love.....
Wowza.. I really feel the love in here! You are a beautiful poet!
Thanks so much for your wonderful entry!
Best of luck to you my dear
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Truly valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL LADY!
I will treasure every moment
of our beautiful gift
for once in a lifetime do you
get to experience a love like this.
A divine ending to a fine piece with the rhythm and rhyme of love BUT something tells me that TRUE LOVE will come your way more than ONCE IN A LIFETIME and that one of these days it will stay and not fade away - as it often does. The flame of desire will burn higher and higher and take the two of you beyond the pleasures of heaven, to say the least! GOOD LUCK in this contest with this wonderful piece!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
Your teacher says go to the head of the class and get your just rewards.
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I don't don't think a love like this will ever come round again. I think to even experience this you are very lucky.
Thank you as always hon for your fab comments always a pleasure.
As you are my teacher what are my rewards for going to the top of the class?
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Oh sug, this is stunning. This is to me about a love that has happened that couldn't be helped. Maybe I am wrong but I feel there are more than two involved. It feels like an affair and at some point you are going to have to let him go. This brought tears to my eyes, I felt the pain as you give him your heart the part of you that will always belong to him.
Yet I feel you are happy in the love you both share. I do believe that true love does only come once in a lifetime and it doesn't matter the length of time you have together you will be left with many beautiful memories. I am guessing this is about you and Wayne again. I think what you both have is beautiful.
I also believe you can't help who you fall in love with, love always finds a way and usually when you least expect it. This is deep and passionate left me with shivers.
We must chat soon sug
wishing you the very best
Emma
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Thanks hon for your wonderful comment. We will chat soon. There is a lot of truth in your comment.
I am head over heels and that is all there is to it. What we have is a fantastic bond..it is hard to explain.
~sugar~
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yayyy another entry!
*does rain dance*
this is, simply, beautiful.
i loved:
"changes the darkest sky
to a vibrant blue"
so true.
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i am on my tre babe so i will come back and re read it chelle i promise i luv this almost make me feel about a previous situation i am in secretly right single now
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Ok hon
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Oh hun this is so beautifully written
Love overflows, those wonderful feelings touching hearts
a love so special and true.
Each stanza held me .. capturing me and sent a tingle through my heart.
Best wishes to you
Julie
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Thank you Julie for your lovely comment
Truly appreciated
~sugar~
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