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Planting Life

The threshold waits before you
the garden waits beyond;
what you plant is what you'll reap
when seasons have moved on.

When springtime fades to summer
and summer fades to fall
and winter's white hair slumbers
bringing chills to root and all.

What will you have planted there
beneath the blanket of your life?
Will you have you grown your happiness
to fullest, grandest height?

While planting in that garden,
don't forget how things can grow;
the hollyhocks along the fence
won't stay in a straight row.

The daffodils will wander
and the weeds will come to call;
the dandelions running wild
will come to crash where they might fall.

Be careful of how much you plant
into the earth that you must tend
'cause everything needs room to grow
and you'll at times need time to mend.

Don't lock the gates and let the briars
climb the bars and block your view
The world has liars and thieves
but gates turn out the honest too.

The best intent sometimes won't be enough,
some things will die despite your work.
Instead of tending "might have been"
you pour your heart back into the dirt.

And if you look too closely at each plant
the world will only look quite small;
and if you often say that you can not
then nothing becomes... naught at all

All that lives knows joy and hurt
and all that's strong must sometimes bend
and everything needs sun and rain,
it doesn't mean your dreams must end.

No matter how old you become
your plants will never become stone;
they grow with you and will welcome,
the way you've changed... they way you've grown.

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  • lianonsidhe silver member
    December 29, 2008

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    Oh, this is just the inspiration I needed to pick myself up and get going again on one of my biggest ambitions. I have a musical work that is a good way along the line, but had I lost the energy and enthusiasm as the going got tough and my muse went to sleep, but these words have reminded me that time is precious. I really do want to see this project finished and at least leave my personal world a little something of me. Thank you for inspiring me to keep going! This is a lovely and inspirational write.


  • Ellis gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    A terrific poem

    sp.-- right at the end -- "the" for "they"
    and
    "Will you have you grown your happiness" -- a comma after "Will you,"?

    This is a fine poem with very good advice for living.


  • Cynewulf
    August 31, 2008

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    Beautiful extended metaphor. This flows & scans so well, I enjoyed it a lot. I think you definitely reap what you sow at times. Nice poem.