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Subconscious Memories...***

 

 

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In depths of fright where nothing here will fight,

Leaves sour taste as ghosts of past are chased,

Red sparks of light as dark crests abject night,

Despair replaced once hope again embraced.

 

Warm yellow glow as darkness crawls down slow,

In edgy state though nothing here my foe,

Supplanted ochre sky within mind's eye,

Exhaling sigh as morning birds do fly.

 

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Wandika 8-30-2008

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Sunconscious Memories...A Heroic Rispetto
Wandika 8-30-2008

Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder…

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  • deercatcher
    November 10, 2008
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    http://allpoetry.com/poem/3129898

    Aroma...


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    OH I LOVE Rispetto! I LOVE RISPETTO and you have handled the Heroic version of this form beautifully. A gem. Wonderfully done. Your last stanza simply puts me in a place I love to be. All of it, really. Well done. I have to peek at this contest now! Thank y ou. ~Pamela


    • Wandika gold member
      September 1, 2008
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      Thanks Pam

      I enjoy your comments and poetry though much of it is beyond me.

      Jim


  • Samplette gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    A beautiful form of poetry. Wonderfully crafted. I like the flow of this one. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam

    • Wandika gold member
      August 30, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thought I would try something new.

      Jim

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