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Insomniatic

I am waiting for the morning
so that I can sleep
the night has not been kind
nor is it comforting

the darkness plays tricks on my eyes
but it often get worse when I close them
while the night is busy weaving its lies
I'm doing my best not to give in

I am not crazy
but my sanity is troubled in the evening
my thoughts get hazy
and the shadows can be very deceiving

sometimes I cant keep control of my indecision
and I completely lose my resolve
I feel locked in a psychological prison
never knowing just how far I'll fall

may the morning come quickly
and my mind be at rest before too long
take me ever so swiftly
for I have been waiting all night for the dawn

Author notes

It is so hard for me to sleep at night, or at all (for verious reasons), sleep 6 hours up for 25. erg! haha

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  • LaylaLace
    September 1, 2008
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    I love how you began this. Good luck in the contest!