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Fore- Summer is a Comming

I guess I always knew, how my summer begins.

   A golf widow I would be.

For the longest time it was hard of me.

  Now I know that is not true.

I watch him pratice in Pj's.

  Several times in a bath towel.

I told him never wear less.

 

He had a comet for it all.

  Said I always liked the show.

I knew his good twist from his bad.

  In his back swing everything showed.

I told him never listen to the guys.

  Keep your eves off the girls.

Don't let me hear you swear

  I might hock your clubs.

 

We have a house on the back of the greens.

  Down by his favorite hole.

The tenth was he was his best.

  Always there between one and two.

Summer, winter, spring and fall.

  I go out and yell, "Fore."

I want them to know he is playing through.    

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  • Mortal
    September 5, 2008

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    I love the phrase "Golf Widow" This is a very sweet and funny write. kind of sentimentally sad.
    Thank you!


  • VeneVidiVici
    August 30, 2008

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    This is a nice picture and creates a feeling of nostalgia and loss. I like your phrasing. Good luck in the contest.