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embers

diluvium jewels
ablaze in desire
of restraint
abandoned

so committed
to combustion

so devoted
to scarlet flame

find each other smoldered
and add syncopated swelter

to craft torrid
shades beyond vermilion

in transparent carnality
of pure intention

insatiable like
a satyr's inclination  


Author notes

a heart is red hot pepper and love is a fire...Unknown

Diluvium: A deposit of superficial loam, sand, gravel, stones, etc., caused by former action of flowing waters, or the melting of glacial ice.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    Humm..flowing like the hot water coming down from the body of the nude woman..I love it..well done..and my thanks for sharing it...


  • Cannonsfire
    August 30, 2008
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    And you are a chilli