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Rock the Cradle, Make Me Beg for More-Acrostic Poem

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Reach down and massage my aching member

Open your lips and slide your tongue all over me

Cover my cock with the warmth in your mouth

Kiss me tenderly and tell me that you love me

 

Time is on our side as you glide your tongue

Holding me captive as I lay here before you

Each stroke from your gentle hands sends me over the edge

 

Close your eyes and feel me as I enter you

Rocking back and forth like a wave on this erotic ocean

All of the stars have come out to shine for us as we

Dive deep into our dreams of ecstasy and eroticism

Let me hold you up by your feet and suckle your flower

Every moment that passes we fall deeper in love

 

Moving down my body you grab hold of my manhood

And with every lick I give you, you begin to suck powerfully

Kaleidoscope of colors move throughout my mind

Everytime you squeeze my balls the burning continues

 

My body trembles as the sensations increase

Entering you from behind I start to pump deep inside of you

 

Bringing endless waves of aching pleasure  

Essence of our love making quickly envelopes the room

Grabbing hold of your body I throw you onto the bed

 

Feeling and suckling your breasts continuously

Our fires of love ignite as we both cum together

Racing hearts start to slow as our bodies grow limp

 

Moving slowly as we both take a deep breath and sigh

Opening up your eyes you look deep into mine

Reaching out as I touch your heart you whisper, "I love you"

Enchantingly beautiful as you kiss my lips and fall asleep on my heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Very erotic and well composed thak you for your entry


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 4, 2008
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    much more poetic


  • moon2u
    September 1, 2008

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    Holy Cow

    Oh my you have been a busy boy Jeremy
    this is sizzlin hot stuff Mr.
    congrats on the gold
    hugs Moony


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    WOW

    Now that would rock her core to her inner beings, you sure, would be the one to rock her world. thank you for this seductive entry in my contest, good luck
    Linda