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Revenge

I stare off
And dream of bigger things
Bigger than you
Bigger than this universe

The skies are beautiful
But you cannot see them
Your imagination was blocked
When you stopped loving me

When you see a star
Or the moon or sun
They are there
Hating you for hating me

So now
I have revenge
Revenge that you don't understand
But that is the best part

Author notes

This really just kind of spilled out onto paper! I had no idea what I was going to write about until it just kind of happened! Hope you like it even though it doesn't exactly have to do with the picture prompt

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  • Age of Rain
    September 3, 2008
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    You took the prompt into an intriguing direction. Write on fellow poet!