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my bones show because i ate the moon

i'm ice bright
and velvet touched
salty ruby red
crumpled on the floor among the soap suds
disinfect
the knuckles so raw

aching like a soldier in the
darkness swells like birds and birds
hot and smothered

locked in the world
where we press our cheeks together after we kiss;
that happens a lot in the old movies
when the man comes home
when will you come home?

its like being underwater
counting wasted time by slow heartbeats
but you couldn't imagine how crowned i felt
your eyes: cherry pits
even when you bit me
and rolled me
and spun me like sugar
(whitewashed and delirious)
(sickened and spinning)
shining like canaries and apparitions and handfuls
of sand


and how long until
and how many seasons
and what will be thrown
rice
kisses
stones


paint peeled from the walls
he drank her like water
she grew flowers from paper
and waited

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  • rollingzen
    September 3, 2008
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    'he drank her like water'....beautiful..


  • -foreverandever
    August 30, 2008

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    AAAAAAAAAHH where have you been
    you'd better not disappear again
    you cannot taunt me with such delicious, beautiful, magical writing and then go silent again

    this is wonderful. enchanting
    i have missed you