Purity -
White lily
in the spring rain
Author notes
The Prompt is Purity
A contest entry
- Haiku-me by Kappa Pyua.
2100 points, ended September 22, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats on this one, friend Lee!
Wow-Wow-Wowie!!!! Hurray to my good friend Lee!
Summer51 -
Good haiku, perfect in statement and jux. two defenitions are present the lily and the rain that washes things. beautiful words thanks for entering.
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Hi Kappa
Thank you
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A calming image, Lee.
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Hi aesthete
Thank you. This is my second try and I am glad you get an image.
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This is a very good piece with good form, but you have not included, which prompt you used even though I see it is obvious, I need you to follow rules or be DQ', thx. I know it is hard to remeber sometimes.
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What does it mean?
(Pure)innocence? Youth?
Good luck, friend Lee!
Hope you win.
Summer51
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Hi summer
It is up to you to "see" it. If you see innocence and youth then it is. Good luck to you too and may we both win.
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