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Violent Utterances





Hear the blood beating my temples,
breath respired to uttering climax
discharge impulses, violent unnamed
possessed by spasms, tired cynicism.

Soul wanders insensitive to torments
anger rumbles defying laws, macabre
battered slowly rant precedence over
life, step aside in haunted utterances.

Amphetamine,neuropletic, hallucination,
to make a love with so many penalties,
unleashing an instinct in hidden primate
loosing myself in belligerence, loneliness.

Neuroses uncontrolled, spur of moment obsessions,
like to review for an instant moment,the reason,
prior to proliferate, empty excessive pain massive
to exhibit resonance in an entire silence hanging.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 










 

Author notes

Prompt: Rant

neuroleptic: a disease concerning nerves

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  • written-in-ink
    September 7, 2008

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    wow i loved this

    it was amazing very nice job
    i cant even tell you how nice i loved it so much!


    and i love the vocab
    i myself always you simple words...

    thank you so much and good luck