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Brought Down to Size

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Just look at you standing there
in your ego bulked superior stance,
Knocking down aspirations
thinking no one stands a chance.

Huge flair of vanity, even bigger attitude
trying to muscle your way around,
Hounding with canine viciousness
yelping offensive snarls at the crowd.

Raising your leg at the opposition
spewing forth sarcastic streams,
Relieving yourself of pent up aggression
while biting back any empathy deemed.

What goes around, comes around
bearing vengeance long overdue,
and when you least expect it
those you piss off will piss on you!

Author notes

Pic Prompt-farm2.static.flickr.com/1341/727663041_d1cddd5a17_o.jpg (Looks like Robo-Dog hehe)
(to someone err *special*)

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  • DeJaBlue
    April 10

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    lmfao!


    Soo funny, you really have no bounds to your work, do you??


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    lmao! lol robo dog huh? nicely done here hun and well deserved gold... lol my god this made my night! lol congrats!


  • Nicada silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job with the picture prompt! LOL That picture is scary, and I am impressed by what you came up with for this one. Great job, and I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings, Patty


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 31, 2008
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      LOL Thank you dear, I couldn't help myself.
      I'm glad you got a chuckle outta my write.


  • penman gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Oh my goodness, what an incredible picture. And such a poem. Best of luck in the contest


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    I laughed until my eyes leaked. I love this. Thank you so much for entering. I dont think I have seen this side of you before.

    Great job.

    Mike

    Best of luck in the contest.


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 5, 2008
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      Thanks for the honor of Gold. This is one contest and write I think I'll always remember LOL Just because of that pic! I'm glad you liked my take on it hehe


  • Xianaria gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    i'm gonna PUMP you UP! (SNL skit, mocking Arnold...)
    have fun! looking forward to this lol

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