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my loving egg

she gives so much of herself
to those she calls her friends
even through all the heartache and pain
her love still never comes to an end
her father always looked right past her
never seeing the down ass bitch that shines through
no matter what she goes through
always know il be here cause i sure do love you
my eggy

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i want to be an egg...oh wait i already am yokes

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  • Rejected Easter Egg
    August 30, 2008

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    *pulls down my trousers and shove my bum in your direction* Thank you though hunny it was really sweet and I loved it quite alot... and I don't do that often. And again I'm glad you combined two prompts, which alot of you seem to be doing . But I like people who challenge themselves.

    sincerely,
    eggeh