In my mind; I am god
In my heart; I am yours
In the future; my life's over
In your smile; I see lies
and I hear you talking to me again
and I know that this means nothing
but in my heart it is "we" again
but I can't seem to find the ground
[gimme back my alcohol]
In your life; I'm a mosquito
In your bed; I'm still young
In my condition; I'm barely alive
In the present; it's just me
Could you repeat my name so I know to listen
Healing millions in my condition
I'll save the world with this single thought
Killing millions in my condition
[gimme back my alcohol]
In my soul; I feel kind of free
In my notebooks; I am smart
In my mirror; I am a zombie
In this moment; we are lovers
I'm talking without thought this time
and I feel so.. so so alive
and i...can...feel.. my... tongue.. slip again..
i..am..s..
[gimme back my alcohol]
Author notes
'Keeps her photographs close to his heart'
I chose Scoff..
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A contest entry
- Bleach [all we know is falling] Riot! by brittany.geeze.
475 points, ended September 19, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is brilliant babe. Wayyy better than what I wrote. I'm so glad to see you writing again and I wish I could write as amazingly as you do. There's so much emotion in this and so many lines that I can relate to. Good luck in the contest. I love this bbi.
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Woot.
Good job.
I absolutely loved it!
I'm positive I'll look back at this one before the contest ends!!
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