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Spring in Summer

spring in summer-
the fountain of life
purifies the soul



Summer51

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#1 Purity.

A contest entry

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  • Lee Tai Wah
    September 22, 2008
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    Hi summer

    Looks like you have another trophy for your mantle


    • Summer52
      September 23, 2008
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      Hello, Friend Lee!

      Maybe...you're my "lucky charm" no?

      You, too...congrats and good luck to more contest you will join in.

      And "I concede" in our limerick. Do not reply to another Haiku of yours for that, ha? We're just having our "light moment." Hope I make you smile a little.

      Thank you, friend Lee for the comment here. I do appreciate that.


      Summer51


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    this would actually be a pivoting haiku in my opinion so you can take out the pausing dash. I also like the idea that you came up with for the prompt. thx for entering the contest.

    • Summer52
      September 23, 2008
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      Thank you very much, Kappa!

      I really appreciate that.


      Summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    Ah, summer,
    your true spirit
    released in your words.

    And you have friend Lee
    jumping in, too!

    Mumsy


    • Summer52
      August 31, 2008

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      Good Sunday PM here, Mumsy!!!

      Yes, friend Lee also joined in the contest.
      And his entry also very good. I hope he wins.

      Thanks for the visit and comment Mumsy!

      Summer51

      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        August 31, 2008
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        Hurah for you, and the words
        continuing to flow!!!


        • Summer52
          August 31, 2008
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          Just my first attempt to HAIKU... I like it...simple, short but with lots of meaning and interpretation on the short lines.

          Yet, I dunno how others interpreted my entry... hahaha!

          Summer51

  • Lee Tai Wah
    August 30, 2008
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    Hai summer
    Your first haiku too.
    I think I will join too.


    • Summer52
      August 30, 2008
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      Si! Si, mi amigo, Lee.

      Join the fun.
      I'd love to see you here, again.

      Yes, my first Haiku.
      ... and I have one (1) honorable mention trophy..hehe!
      I feel elated, eh!

      Thank you, mi amigo.
      Please start scribbling lines!!!
      I miss your poetry.

      Summer51

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