Ride with me,
embrace this flesh,
as white as snow,
o chariot of lust,
its juices flow.
Dance with me,
let passion burn,
your soul divine,
come bathe in mortal sin,
soon be mine.
Empower me,
your heart ripped out,
love turns to dust,
on satans back i claim thee,
prize of lust.
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wow! wow! wow! this was amazing i really loved this! Dark poetry is one of my favorites! it flowed well and keep me glued to each word keep on writing!
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this is very well written. the picture is amazing too. this is an outstanding poem. you have a lot talent. i agree with everyone's comments this is a wonderful write, please, keep up the good work
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Well Written And worded ! Although my favorite paragraph in here is : Ride with me , embrace this flesh, as white as snow, o chariot of lust, its juices flow. dance with me, let passion burn, your soul divine. Good Luck In The Contest ! Great flow and use of word's that you have written here. Brenda Gae
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A little spelling mistake
L8 divine. You should refer to yourself with a capital I. Only minor typos I suspect.
A reaper of more than just life.
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Superb
Wow, most intriguing. Imagery, rythem, and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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