One love we share, two hearts we own
Two hearts that sing a romantic song
Our hearts will sing till the end of time
Our song will last and make us strong
True love is a light, inside it shone,
Replacing the night with a fabulous dawn
With peace, respect, and a sky-blue hope.
With a special guy, I shared them all
TO BE CONTINUED
Author notes
Still want to write more but the inspiration is gone 
Any suggestions that can help?a nice title?a word that can inspire?
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Inspiration comes and goes, but still what you wrote said plenty. Two hearts as one, that was lovely. My comment is "To be continued"
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Thank you, but inspiration won't be back again..
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True timeless!!
Hello Anan...what a beautiful peice you have created...very impressive...How are you doing...
I was just wondering a girl from Romania...writing in English ...with an Arabic name...Extraordinary indeed ?
Roy-rahbar.
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I love it!! It's soooo..secren and has a good flowing rythem. You mite try something like "Dance of Two Hearts" or the "Timeless or Endless Love Song" i'm not the best for titleing things. I would sugest trying to find inspiration from another source. Maybe try a different perspective like a less personal veiw. The inspiration may be gone for now but I can almost garentee that it will come back. I've been in that situation and I undestand.
~Kathryn~ (aka.Watergoddess101)
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This such a sweet poem
i loved the way it flows...
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what a lovley poem, hope you find your inspiration again well done xx
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Thank you
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Hi. Got some ideas ...
Timeless Hearts ... Fabulous True Love ... KC
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