You should have stayed home, little girl.
The sun doesn't shine for you, with rape fantasies
your swollen eyes will get you no sympathy.
Just perpetuate your truth syrum phrasings,
battered wives syndrom beating eyelashes
against caked mascara trails
I'll trace your dirty lips with my tongue.
Your breath smells sweet, like chloroform
I'd take you in just to be polite
but not to be nice,
there are certain lines I will not cross.
It's 3:24 a.m by the time my phone rings
but you want it bad, and I want back into the graveyard,
the pieces of bone fragments kill me
in private places.
Tearing off fragments of skin
I'll hide with clothing in the sunlight.
my muscles are torn and convulsing under
high pressure touches but it's okay
I'm your special one.
My pitch may rize in several octives
you didn't know I could go, there
pretty metallic boy
when I decide to stop playing
I'll worry about the bruises
as you remember how to breathe.
Author notes
I want to do it all, to you, special one.
From The Vault To Your Eye Sockets
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Dark, malicious and sensuous at the same time...I love what you've done here!
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wow
such a dark and sinister piece
and with a great ending
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I loved the title. Fast paced, edge-of-your-set erotica. You've outdone yourself again, faerie queen.
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More Awesomeness!
you had me at
"Your breath smells sweet, like chloroform
I'd take you in just to be polite
but not to be nice,"
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What a great title
...and as always...the Author note is so much part of the poem!
(there are several typos) but this actually made it even more urgent.
This is so immediate ...and makes me gasp....with horror ...and also cackle maliciously!
So many fabulous lines ...the whole thing!
,,,but loved the conversational / threatening bits
"You should have stayed at home, little girl"
"I'll trace your dirty lips with my tongue"
(("trace" is just right)
"I'd take you in to be polite
but not to be nice" OOOOOOOH!!!
"I'm your special one"
"you didn;t know i could go there"
the whole is threatening ...and kinky too!
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Wow.
That's absolutely crazy lovey. Though i love it dearly.Wonderful piece.
I miss you.
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