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Simply Better

Being yourself is better
than trying to be better than me.
Originality is better
for better or for worse in the long run.
You're better off
in a better place than depressing yourself trying.
You better be sure:
better luck tomorrow...

 

You better believe
things look better with beer glasses.

But you better not laugh,
and you better not cry

at the best better you can be.
Getting better in your mind

breeds better living in reality
It could be better than sex

 

which is better together.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

s.m.

Author notes

Just incase you missed it, "better" is the word I chose.

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  • ea silver member
    September 3, 2008
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    You better, I mean, betcha.


  • Poetess12
    August 31, 2008

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    I enjoyed reading your poem and how you use the word "Better" in your poem. You did a great job.

    Thank you for your entry.


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    You poem reminded me of a childhood ditty - 'a little bit of butter makes the bitter batter better'

    Funny how the repetition of a word makes it seem unknown.

    I liked the wisdom in the final two lines!