You in front of me
Oh so curvaceous
The sparkle in your eyes
Oh so glorious
Your crimson red lips
Oh so luscious
Your breath on my skin
Oh so pervious
Your lips on mine
Oh so infectious
My every sense
Oh so delirious
In each others arms
Oh so tenacious
Sing the song of love
Oh so melodious
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wat up
that is asum
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Nice...
this poem is great,
and oh so sexy!
It's very well written!
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Nicely done. Often repitition is simply repititious. You have made it work very well.
Great job.
Mike -
Oh so
delicious...
she must be
out of all those superlatives you've describe her
surely a one hot mama
I enjoyed reading this...I've been like this in every line
both infectious and contagious, obviously...
Anna Lee
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that's really pretty ^^ i love it ^^
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Vivid. I like the clean, straight-forward voice. gentle read.. and a break from insane, incessant skin-inking lol.
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love it!!!
very good i love the word choices... "Sing the song of love Oh so melodious " this part was.. just beautiful... very well done i love it. it was just pretty... i could see it.. so good ^-^
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Thenkew so much!
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really well writen. I loved this poem
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Thenkew
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Beautiful! Oh wow this is so beautiful! What a lovely write.
Warmest,
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Thenkew! ^_^
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I enjoyed this!
It has a good flow!
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Thenkew!!
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oh !
oh .......it is written in such a way it makes it.... so.... impressive
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Oh! Thenkew so much!
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