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Security's Stage

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The Almighty hands out tools for toil
to build harmony's future frame,
yet all must walk hand in hand with equal respect
no matter the role we play.

For each of us are a step in purpose
linked together to achieve,
should any regard the other with contempt
tranquility's plane will play tricks of time.

Only with united hands
will walls of serenity be formed,
in support when burdens become heavy,
then strength will flow throughout creation's spirit
and the dawn of an affirmative planet
will surely be nourished.

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  • penman gold member
    September 3, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a terrific creation for the prompt. So very well done. Congratulations on the silver.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 1, 2008
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    Beautiful piece of poetry! Wonderfully done and a joy to read. Thank you for your entry.


  • trekkergirl
    August 31, 2008

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    Loved the picture and the words go with it very well. I also like what you said in your piece. I agree that together peace and tranquility can be achieved. Good write. Good imagery. Enjoyable read.