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You came back...

1.

You came back,
to my iron arms.
You saw those tears
in my glass eyes.
You gave me a kiss
on my whispering lips.
You showed love
to my beating soul.
You touched the skin
of my shaking body.
You sang apologizes
to open ears.
You gave the chance
to the man who changed so much.

2.

I never could be happier
with anyone else
than you.
I am ready, to enjoy
early mornings,
God,
Parties,
Friends,
and
life,
with you.
Thank you for coming
back into my life,
I truly absolutely need
your love,
your friendship,
your kiss,
hug,
laughter,
light,
touch,
smile,
voice
in my
life.


3.
Im happy again.
Why?

Because...


You came back...



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  • Wulf-Eyez De Winter
    August 30, 2008

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    This is very well written, well all three of them are i guess you could say, i have poem written similar to this, but it is no where near as well written as yours, you are a very good poet, keep up the good work


    Wulf-Eyez De Winter
    Cassandra


    • Raven De Winter
      August 30, 2008

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      Cassie, you truly are an angel. Maybe you should read the poem I just put up, (read the other notes as well, in both) And tomorrow in the after noon, read the poem Ill put up then. It'll have the answer.