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Baby We're Invincible

[and we'll take this fairy tale to the extreme...]

From this rooftop, the town is ours
Singing at the tops of our lungs
This is our world baby,
and nothing can stop us now

[Baby, we're invincible]

Silent explosions take place across the way
My arms are wrapped around your shoulders;
You're head placed so delicately on my chest;
As we mould this place into our perfection.

You don't have to watch as worlds collide,
I can say I led you blindly into this fate;
You're still just a child, but your heart is mine;

This empty façade; the world you see before you through those rose tinted glasses,
Is not yours; no not yours,
and you say you dream of the future,
Well baby here it is

[Our midnight parade, as we sing to their screams]

and I promise I'll help you see through all these lies
My lucid interpretation of the way you should be
we should be; this should be,
Baby, we can recreate the world after this chaos has passed;

But do you promise to wait
as I live out my punishment?
DO you promise to visit
As I'm sitting behind bars?

For this isn't all mine darling; I did it for you
Never forget; you can't speak a word
For my love, you're my puppet
and I could take you down with me

Just remember my love and how I treated you,
as we stand before this personal disaster;
Baby, we're invincible...
Until you speak a word.

Author notes

Xombii

Don't trust me

I used title number 4 and ten words from the wordbank.
I hope you enjoy it ^.^

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  • stargazer.
    September 13, 2008

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    Wonderfully written I love how you caught me in the beginning and kept me interested throughout the poem.
    Since i cant quote the whole poem ill tell you some of my favorite parts

    "[and we'll take this fairy tale to the extreme...]"
    and
    "[Our midnight parade, as we sing to their screams]"

    "My lucid interpretation of the way you should be
    we should be; this should be,
    Baby, we can recreate the world after this chaos has passed;"

    Simply amazing loved these parts