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[ By my side ]

By my side
While nothing else is constant

One permanent factor
In my usual insanity
Giving me security
Throughout the years

High is the price you demand
But I willingly give it
For I became fond of you
My loyal companion

Elusive moments of safety
You gave me

I am sure our ways
Are to cross hereafter...
Though, forgive me
When I admit
My anticipation consists
Of mixed feelings

For I never know
The vehemence
With which you embrace me,
I am left unaware of
When you are leaving
Or where you are taking me

Nevertheless I enjoy
The familiar melancholy
You convey...
And I am sure it
Won't be long
Before I find myself
under your spell
Once more


My ever-present temptation
My faithful fellow
My false sense of security
My dear friend
Sadness

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  • Poetdontknowit
    September 3, 2008

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    SAD

    Awesome concept you have here! I think that you certainly have a grand way of penning your thoughts. I can tell that you have a severe addiction to the pen and paper! Keep on penning!!!
    POETDONTKNOWIT
    WRITING IT HER OWN WAY


  • Susan John Francis
    September 3, 2008
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    nice


  • unavailable
    September 3, 2008

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    I loved this, I so definately can relate, not with the sadness applied so much as I do a sweeter affection for a friend but, you have done a wonder job on this piece no matter what emotion you were writing about.


  • Ashbert
    September 3, 2008

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    lovely

    I thought this poem was written wonderfully, it upsets the heart a bit, to hear of an emotion so intense. great write


  • Ravensdark
    September 3, 2008

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    This poem really tears at my heart. However it is eloquently written and in a sad way very beautiful. There are many things I want to say but I dont know how to say them.....Makes me die just a little inside....great write

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