Yes, it is me.
Here I am once again by your side.
touch me I say
no don't let go
It is truly me.
My love
let us walk this life together
hand in hand
sharing good times as well as bad.
Love can make all things happen
just don't let go of my hand.
Author notes
Just wrote this off the top of my head. It's probably not any good tho
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A contest entry
- Celebrating 200 days on AP prompt is a verse. by Topaze.
1000 points, ended September 12, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Actually, I think it is quite good indeed. You expressed yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one. -
Short, simple..to the point..lovely!
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Wonderful
A terrific creation for the random thought. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Girl, you've got it wrong -
What d'ya mean it's probably no good?! I think it's excellent! Yeah, it's raw, rough poetry - but full of heartfelt expression that many a person would love to have said to them. I think you've done rather well.
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Oh how you do not believe in yourself, your words touched me profoundly. I loved star trek, Scotty what happened to your bottle of scotch, Aye captain it seems I have drank it!
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Ah the worst critic is yourself love, it slides quite nicely into it's groove, thank you for your fine entry in this contest.
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