Metaphor of essence, self awareness is my soul,
intangible acceptance, that makes this mortal whole.
Immortal in ascension, true meaning to my being,
doorway to the afterlife, all knowing and all seeing.
Mirror of eternity, protector of my fate,
your guidance to transcension, I patiently await.
This mortal flesh so fragile, just momentary pause,
on my journey through dimensions, of lifes unwritten laws.
Author notes
Credit :
When soul meets body by ~marshmallowstarz
http://marshmallowstarz.deviantart.com/art/When-soul-meets-body-96423157
A contest entry
- When Soul Meets Body - Picture Prompt by Kazytc.
1300 points, ended August 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I concur Fantastic
A real winner here beautifully written. Reading this gave me chills from start to finish good luck in the contest though I don't feel luck will be a factor, Boog
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Fantastic!
Wow this flows right into the soul! Great rhyme and flow, fabulous graphics and good throughout, though like this bit most:
Metaphor of essence, self awareness is my soul,
intangible acceptance, that makes this mortal whole.
Well penned and eloquently conveyed important message. Bravo, well done love it!
Best of luck in my contest and thanks millions for entering your entry is brilliant.
Poetic Hugs & Thanks
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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