had come to this place
to pursue my aims
but broken are my dreams
i'm feeling low again!
dreams are all lost, forgotten
is there something, really, that life can change?
hazy environ surrounds my days and nights
everything seems so blue, this plight..
where am i heading..with this dejected soul?
these wavy turnings, turmoil upholds
an insecurity within, the charisma all lost,
the sense of aspiration blinding all my thoughts
wanna escape this feeling, the deeply held insecurity
wanna find a way to get out of all these..
wanna climb those mountains again
wanna embrace success and comfort again!
A contest entry
- Open up and give me emotion by Velvet Rose Petals.
1150 points, ended September 21, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I need some genuine comments, as have written after quite a long time!
Comments
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I guess we all come to this place to find something within ourselves, whether it is healing, or peace. I really like how you went with this though. I did however feel the happiness at the end and the lost feeling in the poem. Really great job.. Glad to see some new work other then the prewrites. Good luck
Rose
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