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Till The Day I Die

Wish I could turn back
The hands of time
And bring back
Those days of fun
But now I’m lost
Couldn’t find my feet
To go back, start again
Take the chance
To love again
Now I’m afraid
Thinking it would end
The same as before
Left me heartbroken
And alone once more.

Love touched me once
Twice and you’re the last
The space between us
So far across the distance
You are there, I am here
I guess there is no hope
That we could ever be near
Maybe, I’ll just say goodbye
Make the last days of my life
Living alone without you
Just only you in my dreams
To fill the nights as I cry
But never will I forget you
Ever, till the day I die.



Summer51

Author notes

"How to say goodbye? I know it's hard.
But sometimes, WE must say
What's inside our hearts." -Summer51-



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  • Sincere & Honest!

    This is a beautiful composition written with sincerity and honesty and you portray your emotions well---I can relate to this piece and it brings to mind a composition penned with same subject matter within it's content and I think you will relate to it--Please click the link below! -->

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  • DennisP1
    October 1, 2008

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    Internet love a such a sorrowful thing when two lonely hearts cry out in the darkness and the gods who listen just laugh.."What romantic fools they are to think they have a chance in this uncaring world."

    A wonderful tribute to ones heart.


    • Summer52
      October 1, 2008
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      Yes, I agree..."2 romantic fools.."
      But who knows? Maybe one day, the joke will turned to serious and the fairy godmother will play her wand and DO some magic, eh?

      Thank you for the nice comment. Well-appreciated.



      summer51


  • fairytalelovestory
    September 2, 2008
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    Beautiful loved this very much. it is really good.


    • Summer52
      September 2, 2008
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      Thank you, lostinsidemyself for the nice comment.
      Very much appreciated.


      Summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Oh, summer,
    facing reality,
    but still with hope
    in your gentle heart!

    Love and hugs to you,

    Mumsy

    • Summer52
      August 30, 2008

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      Oh, good evening here, Mumsy!

      A poem full of love, hope and dreams.
      It never ends. But it never lasts.

      Thanks, Mumsy.


      Summer51


      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        August 30, 2008
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        Such a shame, the not lasting...

        • Summer52
          August 30, 2008
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          Hahaha! Just teasing, Mumsy!

          You readily react, eh!

          I'm still in love.
          Just a thought about love.

          Summer51


          • Aesthete2000 gold member
            August 30, 2008
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            ou always scare the wits out of me, summer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


            • Summer52
              August 30, 2008
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              Just making your morning bright,Mumsy.
              Like sunshine that lightens your day.


              Good morning there.


              Summer51

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