Being married was surprising;
Really threw me for a loop.
All at once, I'm realizing,
I can't seem to recoup.
Now, my eyes begin to droop.
Damn, this matrimony!
Everything went wrong!
A wedding, quick and hasty;
Divorce was way too long!
Author notes
*My first attempt at an acrostic--Forgive me if I messed up!
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A contest entry
- Lovers Of Acrostics by misticmoonlite.
675 points, ended August 31, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great rhyme and flow for an acrostic!
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very good for first attempt
that was first attempt at acrostic and not divorce wasn't it lol, sorry that was a bad sense of humor. Congrats on the silver bling
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First Attempt
Well, let me tell you this: for a first attempt, you did extremely well. I remember my first attempt...it wasn't pretty...made me sort of feel like that guy in the pic. I enjoy your poetry and your rhyme scheme is always right on target. Well done. Congrats on silver.
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Well ...
for a first attempt, this is really a roaring success.
Well done. But ... sigh ... divorce is not a very humorous topic ... and sometimes marriage, too, is a solemn affair.
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what a sense of humor
first time at this, was very nicely done, humor as only you can do through divorce, thank you for taking the step to becoming a pro at this form, keep doing them you will be at the top as you are there now! lol good luck
Linda
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LOL. This is a great acrostic Al!!!! Good luck in the contest.
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