An endless flow of karma drips,
from her very soul.
The changing of her destiny
is out of her control.
The lives she’s altered with her love,
cannot be measured on a scale.
Her devotion seeps from every pore,
surely goodness will prevail.
Ascending with the universe,
on a level that’s not been matched.
To form a brand new life,
in a physique that’s yet unhatched.
Taking to the next dimension,
a love that never did exist.
Knowing if you are true of heart,
there is every reason to subsist.
Author notes
http://marshmallowstarz.deviantart.com/art/When-soul-meets-body-96423157
A contest entry
- When Soul Meets Body - Picture Prompt by Kazytc.
1300 points, ended August 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
I love how an image can create such emotion.
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Fabulous!
Wow this is fantastic, so beautifully tender yet poetically graphic, and emotive, reassuring and soothing.
Loved the bit which goes:
An endless flow of karma drips,
from her very soul.
The changing of her destiny
is out of her control.
Though all of this poem is brilliant, I loved this bit best.
So true the words too which is great stuff and penned well throughout with good flow and rhyme, fabulous read, well done!
Best of luck in my contest and thanks millions for entering your entry is brilliant.
Poetic Hugs & Thanks
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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