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The Figure

The suffocating form of darkness
Grabs me from the inside
Sinking into my anxiety
Sweat cold and salty
Rushes beneath the skin

The figures gather
In the cloak of night
Infared betrays my thoughts
Seeking me from the light
My spirit is the trees

Ancient, damaged
Blind to my once human thoughts
A deformed shell of death
I wait for soul's blood
I wait for the sweet flow of release

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  • BeautifullyBroken27
    September 3, 2008
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    awesome love i


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    This is very creepy. It makes me think of walking alone at night, feeling like being watched and followed. Very well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!