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Bugs

Minuscule bugs befuddle The Big Cheese
He besieges them with bogeyman fears
Yet they bustle as collectors of clouds

Ever attempting to scrape golden dust

From creation's deficiency of plants

 

 

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 1, 2008
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    This is a take I didn't quite expect, but I like it lol Wonderful write!


  • Cannonsfire
    August 30, 2008
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    lol Your mind works in mysterious ways Lol


  • notorious
    August 29, 2008

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    atempting==>attempting

    "Minuscule bugs befuddle The Big Cheese"
    I like the capitalization for 'The Big Cheese'. Makes it seem like it's actually a bogeyman.

    I like "golden dust".

    Ah. I'm not in the mood to comment. I'm too pissed off. God. I'm sorry!