Minuscule bugs befuddle The Big Cheese
He besieges them with bogeyman fears
Yet they bustle as collectors of clouds
Ever attempting to scrape golden dust
From creation's deficiency of plants
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Comments
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This is a take I didn't quite expect, but I like it lol Wonderful write!
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lol Your mind works in mysterious ways Lol
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atempting==>attempting
"Minuscule bugs befuddle The Big Cheese"
I like the capitalization for 'The Big Cheese'. Makes it seem like it's actually a bogeyman.
I like "golden dust".
Ah. I'm not in the mood to comment. I'm too pissed off.
God. I'm sorry! 
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