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Life Is What You Make It?

life is what you make it
right
and when your broken
smile
and when you cry
laugh
and when your lonely
talk
and when they curse you
love
so the saying goes
life is what you make it
in other words
lie

Author notes

I've been listening to alot of Sixx: A.M. so latly my work has been influenced by their songs and this one has also... mabye someday I could add on to this and acctually turn it into a song eh ..... if only I had musical talent ^^

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  • Sound of Madness
    September 15, 2008

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    I love this poem. You did a fantastic job on this, and I completely agree with you. Wow, this poem blew me away.


  • Janice M Pickett
    September 13, 2008

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    It is what you make it actually

    We all can change anything not so good into something better just by changing how we think about it. It may seem impossible but when you learn how to do it it works very very well. You wrote this realy well. Well Done..


  • thewhitesettler
    September 9, 2008

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    You really had me there. I didn't see the end coming, very good, but you can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can fool a fool anytime. Cheers Tws...


  • Ijustcantforgethim
    August 29, 2008
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    I like it a lot!

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