life is what you make it
right
and when your broken
smile
and when you cry
laugh
and when your lonely
talk
and when they curse you
love
so the saying goes
life is what you make it
in other words
lie
right
and when your broken
smile
and when you cry
laugh
and when your lonely
talk
and when they curse you
love
so the saying goes
life is what you make it
in other words
lie
Author notes
I've been listening to alot of Sixx: A.M. so latly my work has been influenced by their songs and this one has also... mabye someday I could add on to this and acctually turn it into a song eh
..... if only I had musical talent ^^
Comments
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I love this poem. You did a fantastic job on this, and I completely agree with you. Wow, this poem blew me away.


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It is what you make it actually
We all can change anything not so good into something better just by changing how we think about it. It may seem impossible but when you learn how to do it it works very very well. You wrote this realy well. Well Done..


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You really had me there. I didn't see the end coming, very good, but you can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can fool a fool anytime. Cheers Tws...

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ah very wise words
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I like it a lot!
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ty ^^
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