Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Alpha and Omega

Missing image
A soul transcended of earthly realm.
Precious daughter Helmle,
blood line of Chiron
bound to beauty's form, man's siren
Suspended tween heaven and earth.
adrift the emptiness her birth.
Neither goddess nor mortal
the heavens chortle.
Longing to universal call
yet in thrall
of woman's desires.
A soul cannot transpire
Sealed of karmas' fate this rising soul
yearning of ascension
in 5th dimension.
Torn now of needs celestial and flesh
in cruel cosmic mesh.

Author notes

When soul meets body by ~marshmallowstarz
http://marshmallowstarz.deviantart.com/art/When-soul-meets-body-96423157

Theme keywords:

Karma
Chiron
Soul
Ascension
Transcension
5th Dimension
Rising Soul

Please write a poem of NO more than 20 lines on the above picture:
When soul meets body by ~marshmallowstarz

The keywords above are for further guidance but not vital that they are used in the poem, they are just ideas or pointers.

No bashing
No StICky CAps (like this).
If you reserve please complete within 24 hours if poss.
No bad language
No explicit erotica
If ADULT please mark as such.

Please pen something good and if poss 'out of the ordinary'
Rhyme is preferred.
Rhyming Couplets or Quatrains are good.
Please make the reading of the poem legible and not on backgrounds which obscure the text.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ah..just thought it may have been a Gold..The prompt you have taken very seriously and done a great write here..Between rhyme and your vivid imagination you have made a little masterpiece here!


    • Rclane gold member
      September 24, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you for so much of your time this evening in reading and commenting. I'm glad that you enjoyed my words...


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    August 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Nice job

    A great poem filled with imagery that seems to flow off your tongue while reading. Good luck in the contest, Boog

    • Rclane gold member
      August 30, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you for your time in reading and commenting.


  • Kazytc
    August 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Brilliant!

    Wow this is good, and the clever mention of some of the key words too and so eloquently written too. Great poetic graphics and flow and good vocabulary wow fascinating read.
    Love the whole poem, was looking for particular lines to pick out that I liked most but I like them all so can't single out any specific lines in this one!
    Great message penned here too, fabulous! Well done! Love it!
    Best of luck in my contest and thanks millions for entering your entry is brilliant.
    Poetic Hugs & Thanks
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx

1 - 5 of 5