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This is a HAPPY poem

This is a happy poem
I dont know what to put here

I love my friends
I love my family

and this is sounding like a preschooler
oh well cause inside i am

i love to sleep
i love the color blue

I love the word meloncoly
even if i cant spell it

so if you are wondering why im writing this
I thought i wrote too much sad poems

so this is a rare happy poem
SO LIKE IT!!!! jk you dont have too

Please tell me what you think and i know its not grammatically correct, but i dont care

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  • VampyEyes
    September 8, 2008
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    i like the words... lots of words.... I'm bored im im gonna count the words... 86 words :^]


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    September 2, 2008
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    :-DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD


  • Sle3p
    August 30, 2008

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    YAYYYY

    I know you love me , I THINK I LOVE MY FRIENDS MOOOREEEE lol, jk. I LUURRVE IT!!! <3 <3 <3. chelsea chan was really bored XD. see you


    ~maddie


  • Critical Jive
    August 30, 2008

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    A+

    "I love my friends" [yes guys... she wants me ]

    "I love to sleep" [we have alot in common >_>]

    "I love the word meloncoly" [the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya is an awesome show, go check it out~]

    "so this is a rare happy poem, SO LIKE IT!!!! jk you dont have too" [heh, doesnt matter if we like it or not XD. you shared your feelings so thats all that matters. i know a little more about you now so i feel like your REAL twin. *looks at Lauren with envy* ]

    /endpost

    • VampyEyes
      September 8, 2008
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      Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya is WEIRD... but so am I so it fits. :]

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