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Tenderness of nature

Holding out my hand and embracing you,
seeing you as a tiny miracal from God.

So much history lives within your veins,
your heart knows a time before us all.

We are the strangers to your home,
the ones destined to destroy you.

Yet you let us come close,
showing only love and acceptance.

If only the world could be like you,
maybe we could all learn to live as one.


Author notes

This is a PIF I won from Arkbear http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419167

Winner please pif 300 of the 400 awarded

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Reserves must complete by close of contest-thank you!

Pic is your prompt (because I suck at quotes)hehe

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 1, 2008
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    Such a gentle and touching read. Very nice indeed. Thank you for your entry!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    excellent expression

    Your words tell how every creature in nature is so special. We could learn a thing or two from these intelligent animals.

    Good luck in the contest!!

    Jeannette


  • Curious LiLi
    August 29, 2008
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    Very beautiful.
    I love nature!