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Black Moon

As I lay under the black moon in this blood lit sky, I do cry
The bodies of my family spread out before me
My hate now evolves into a monster, a new killing machine

Inhuman, no morals, no thought
In blood stained hands I do cry under this Black moon
Tears of blood do flow for my hate cannot be stopped

I will kill again, I do not know
I just go with the wind and hunt that unheard sound
Under this black moon my curse appears

The next victims lay before me, blood sucked away
My heart pulsing with anticipation, for it's next meal
My hate rises, this fury sends me out of control

As the last drops of blood are licked from my lips
I smile, now content with my feast
The world now turned black
Blood now drains from the faces of my victims, as they look in fear

Under this black moon I feast again
In the cursed world
Under the black moon

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    September 1, 2008

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    Awesome, I love dark things like this. Made me think of Vampyres and extreme blood lust.. Like majhor blood lust, ew. haha. Good luck.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Very dark and chilling! And I thought red moons were scary! Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!