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Nothing to Sing but Sweet Whisperings

 

 

Shall I rape nature for metaphor

with nothing of purpose within my grasp?

Such a myriad of elements await my call,

yet my mind idles, wandering…

 

The heart will play to such songs

fumbling, pierced before it is done

that brainless thing, misunderstood

confounded with sorrowed melancholy-

cannot sit still as I try to mend it-

yet always, yes, always with the next lyric

fool that it is…

 

So I'll sing nothing, nothing of value

just hum sweet whisperings, accent the day

to reflect more brightly the whitewashed walls

swashed with scenes of memories

with nature, rapping at the windowsill

flickering, fidgeting, to get in…

 

 

 

Author notes

Ezra Pound on free verse: as regarding rhythm, to compose in the sequence of a musical phrase, not in the sequence of a metronome... (translation- play with your feet...)

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  • Nicolette gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    "play with your feet..." - yes, I can identifity with that - not the strict rhythm/pace of a metronone. And the heart...yes the heart often ignores its own beat too and just wants to dance and "write" free verse too, lol. Very interesting take on the music prompt here... I liked this and the way the heart was caught (well sort of) between inviting nature in or not... A really nice hum about this one. Thank you for sharing it with us in the contest.

    ~ Nicolette


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Only you my dear one.
    this was great.
    thanks for sharing with us

    and by the way did the nun get the ax in the story of ours or what?? LMAO i am still waiting.

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