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lost

lost in the dark
left alone
broken spirit
no room to soar
like an eagle
to spreed my wings
wide as these tears
fall down my face
wish it was back to
the ways of the old...
no longer would we
indians be left to
stay on these
reservations
lost in thoughts of
long ago

and no place to go left alone

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  • Warrior7
    August 31, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi Native Chic

    Yes in the old days people never took anything for granted. This is a good poem makes the reader think.
    Keep writing


  • sidewinder silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    well wish for those days to be again... following the old ways where our people see nature for what it is.
    Bill