Flowers, flowers, everywhere I look
Flowers on the lawn and over by the brook
My Mother has planted flowers just everywhere
She has fresh flowers inside every little nook
Now of all the flowers Mom has growing
I really can't choose just one
But over there is a cluster of three
Raidiant in the noon day sun
I'll pick them now and place them in
A glass of water and then
I'll take them to the Hospital
And give them to my firend
These three little flowers did
Just what I wanted them too
My friend smiled and smiled again
Saying thanks for all you do
Author notes
Little flowers by Rhinoseri=prompt
A contest entry
- Come Get Your Pic Prompt! by foreverair.
500 points, ended September 7, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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Thank you for the HM and your comments. It was a joy to enter your contest.... Katie
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oh, this is really sweet. I love the whole making your friend smile part. It feels so nice when people do small, but meaningful things like that for you. The rhyme is a little forced in some parts, but very nice nonetheless. Great take on the prompt! Good luck!
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your prompt is http://rhinoseri.deviantart.com/art/Little-Flowers-16310270
please credit Little Flowers by ~Rhinoseri
Remember, if you really, really don't like the prompt, you can ask me for one other prompt.
Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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