life is nothing like the movies
its not like the movies were there is
always a happy ending
u cant always have it your way it not burger king were
u get anything ur way
life has its twist and turns
and leaves u to burn
were secrets are learned
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Welcome To Allpoetry
Hi Native Chic
If i can make suggestions here, firstly try and not use internet lingo when writing poems because it dosen't capture the words in your poetry. U = you
and also use spell check it dosen't take long to correct your spelling. Were = where, Ur = your.
It is very true what you have written, you can't always get what you want in life.
Keep writing
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This is true
Short and to the point.Now I really want a whooper

