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dogs dont tell lies

Dogs don't tell lies

so its no surprise

that their mans best friend

they cant stab you in the back,

there's nothing that they lack

They don't judge you

it doesn't matter if your poor,

if your famous,

if you pretty or if your ugly

it doesn't matter to mans best friend

even after the worst of days

its all okay when I look into my dogs eyes

and see that she will always be there for me

and that she loves me

she wont leave me for a big steak

and shes the only one I can trust

when the going gets tough

because I friend will spread rumors

they'll tell your secrets

but dogs are forever

and they don't lie

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 5, 2008

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    i like this poem is very cute, i love the flow and rhytum great job

    please put the option in your notes so i can see your inspiratin for favor


  • Erin200
    August 31, 2008

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    it's really good. I think it would've been better if it rhymed no offense, but that's just me. It's second only to the vampire one you wrote (I almost put ate *ogle*) on the other account. It was good. Keep writing!
    ~Erin


  • Missa
    August 30, 2008

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    sorry, you need to add the option number. i encourage you to enter again after you add the option because your poem is really good.


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    August 30, 2008

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    Yay Josie!!! This was so awesome!!!!! I so loved it!!! Like this is da best poem I ever read form you!!! well on this and your other accounts that is!! But it was so sweet yay for doggies!!!! they rock!!! oh and yea I can relate to this wit my dog. Well even if he is old and half blind and he can't hear anything I say but that makes him a good guy to talk to cuse well he can't hear!!! What ever I'm starting to babble. Awesome job!!!

    ~Roofie~