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Ah!!!

Closing the window, inviting
darkness into my room
I sat
with a lost heart.
Silence
killing imagination, loneliness
singing melody-less songs,
and the darkness --
skulks
while telling cruel jokes,
vaporizing
my soul.

I am dead.
AH!!!

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  • Samplette gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    A good write. The way it is posted it is more than 10 lines. Though I like it. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam