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To the Audience

Wait a minute.
Sit back down.
Study the sadness of my frown.
Wait!
Don't go!
Watch me as I hang my head down low.
Life is not only what you make it.
Life can be beautiful.
Life can be like a dream.
But never forget life is a gift from God.
Ok.
Now you can depart.
Thanks for letting me share with you what's been stored in my heart.

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Please study the feelings in this poem and analyze it.

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  • jadeangyal
    October 24, 2008

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    When I read this, I see someone addressing the audience through body language, without speaking. It's that kind of thing that people long to say, but seldom do...perhaps a deathbed soliloquy.