At birth our mothers and Fathers share a piece of their souls,
To their child for life and as that child grows.
How they are taught and how you embrace their soul
Whether that child is bound to heaven or hell you ran the show
You see within the teachings,
we often fail the child.
In the effort of knowledge so reaching,
become lost all the while.
They learn the wrongs from their parents,
while good times they had.
Leaving the soul lost and often sad.
Yet once they are grown to find their own way,
you tarnished this soul taking away, a little day after day
On the passing a time most don't know,
it's a time where the soul meets the body now complete and whole
The time of rejoining to their makers you see,
make sure in heaven you will be.
For hell has no compassion no love to give,
and for so many children born , hell was all you were willing to give so hell is where they live.
Author notes
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I pray for all children as for each such precious angels given as a gift of eternal life yet look at our world and how they so mistreat the children and taught so wrong . Its becoming a world without compassion and love a world becoming so corrupt its becoming hell on earth . Think of all the lost souls at birth where the parents riddled with drugs and uncaering have caused pain
that it is never forgotten and in the turn around those children follow the same path where will their soul meet their body
A contest entry
- When Soul Meets Body - Picture Prompt by Kazytc.
1300 points, ended August 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful job, a great piece on the terrible start and sometimes full life many children must live. Oarents are so self involved that they have to worry about themselves and too many are into drugs, alcohol and even working that the children get neglected or abuse severly.
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Bravo! Well Said!
Great poetic work here and very true words and sentiments too. You have penned a vitally important message here that hopefully all will heed.
Fabulous graphics, rhyme and flow and very commendable on all levels.
I agree totally with all you say, you are very well clued up.
Love this :
'At birth our mothers and Fathers share a piece of their souls,
To their child for life and as that child grows.
How they are taught and how you embrace their soul
Whether that child is bound to heaven or hell you ran the show'
How very true and what a fabulous start to this phenomenal work.
Fabulous entry, thanks millions for entering my contest, and best of luck! Your entry is brilliant.
Poetic Hugs & Thanks
Kaz.
Kazytc x
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