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not a breakfast guy



green toothpaste
on a green brush

I'm not a breakfast
kinda guy

the substitute
for the first meal of the
day
was
a
cigarette

which I found hidden
under dusty magazines

I contemplated
going
down the
road to purchase a pack

but man
I need to cut down anyway
so I decided not to

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  • scenario five
    August 30, 2008

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    I got this sudden urge of saddness when I read this.

    But, it was really really great. I really like your style of writing.

    keep up the amazing work.

    staygold.

    -jenn