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Waterfalls

 

 

Words of rainbow promises cascading down upon the mind

Always bringing the drops of hope into the heart's thirsty soil

Touching every tender ache pore with expectation's moisture

Each of ideal's droplets thought to give the future a rain of blessings,

Ready in the soul for a wash of dreams to come unto tomorrow

Feeling the cool, clear taste of trust stream over the brain

Anticipating utopia to flow in showers of change

Letting the lips of candidates water one's desert in their fluid claims

Lost to any sense of quenching when their liquid turns toxic stains

Seduced and soaked voters left swimming in swampland of lies.

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Oh my bro, this is simply stunning. Love the acrostic and your wonderful words! Best of luck!


  • OurGoldenYears Page gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    WOW

    This is very pretty, the poetry you pen is so very serene, thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest
    Linda