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Listen to my Whispers

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                   Die alone                 [ Must this be my fate?]
 
                                  Walk alone           [ Why can't I find someone to be at my side?]

                                                  Be alone              [ I hate this]

                                                           Leave me alone     [ Don't go]

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  • genderideals--
    August 31, 2008
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    How is this a poem? It's more like some fresh billboard about stopping self-injury right before it's ravaged by spray-painting hooligans. There is no original thought within lying when you speak. There is only confusion as to what your poems are made of.

    You are not emo.


  • AshleyAesthetic
    August 29, 2008
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    a different kind of poem
    but i really really like it