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Flight

Warm thoughts in a blurred haze.
The heart of mortals a simple maze.
What comes of the gods who seek only the goddesses.
Do they consume each other in flames.
Will they become one and share each others names?

Come with me to the land where shadows hide.
Bathed in the abyss, where demons ride.

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  • Aisades
    November 11, 2008

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    Beautiful

    My brother shares my soul's outlook. I feel you here. Us Capricorns are a strange but beautiful zodiac sign. Difficult, yes-but worth it. MY tolerance for bullshit from people is becoming increasingly minute. I too, withdraw now to gather my strength (like you) in order to prepare for upcoming battles and resolutions to irritations. I feel like a train picking up speed. The steam pressurizing only to become unstoppable. I know those shadows you speak of. The bleak moments where you must love yourself thoroughly-for you are all you have. But I'm here, even if I'm in my corner among my own shadows brother.


  • Sunshine Always
    September 28, 2008
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    A lovely piece, written well. Thought provoking and the last two lines excellent...mal